
Today was crazy. First I was just playing out side then I herd a huge splash. It was my mom she was working on the roof and she fell into my hot tub. I thought she was dead,but she wasn't she was just sitting there. That was weird. Then later my mom were just sitting on the couch hypnotized. Then I heard a noise in the kitchen. I looked in and there was a crazy hypnotized zombie I realized it was my dad! I punched him and he snapped out of it so I pushed my mom and she woke up. Wow that was scary!
it hooked me but I think it could use more time sequence words.
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